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Behind the Scenes — Conflict

March 29, 2016 By Martha Alderson

Before we begin Step Two Behind the Scenes — Conflict, let’s review Step One Behind the Scene: Plot at the Sentence and Scene Level 

Step One

We were looking for verbs. Specifically, verbs that depict the characters’ actions and nonverbal behaviors as fleeting physical emotional responses through body language.

conflictMaximize moments of intense conflict, tension, suspense or curiosity. The character’s behavior and actions shown in scene allow us viscerally access to what the character is thinking and internalizing. A character is always communicating emotion in one way or another. At this point, we’re not interested in dialogue or what the character is saying with words. We’re looking for what the character is communicating without words — feelings as transmitted through her body language. 

While searching for verbs in the first few scenes of your story, you may have discovered some bland verbs. Switch up non-communicative for those that preform double duty by showing what is taking place while also communicating the character’s emotions.
For example: clutching his neck as opposed to stroking transmits two different feelings

You also may have identified one or more nonverbal behaviors and body language that perfectly reflect your character’s inner defining traits. Make note of that for each main character in the Character Emotional Development column of your Scene Tracker.

Step Two

Behind the Scenes — Conflict

1) As described in Writing Blockbuster Plots: Step-by-Step Guide to Mastering Plot, Structure & Scenes, you note the emotionally charged moments in each scene with symbols in the Change in Emotion column of your Scene Tracker. The plus and minus symbols or up and down arrows indicate the fluctuating and fleeting emotions the character experiences throughout the scene.

Now, you’re asked to assess the specific nonverbal behavior or communication, including facial expressions, eyes, mouth, postures, gestures and touching, the tone of voice and the spatial distance between two or more people at these moments that reflect these fleeting changes in the character’s mood or emotional state. 

2) In Writing Blockbuster Plots, you’re guided how to assess your scenes for dramatic action. Indicate with a checkmark on the Conflict column of your Scene Tracker those that do indeed have some sort of conflict, tension or suspense. Leave empty the box for scenes with no conflict.

Now, for those scenes with a checkmark, identify the specific sentences and words that demonstrate the effect of the conflict on the character. A character’s involuntary expression of great internal, personal, intimate and revealing emotion may move across the character’s face in a fraction of a second. These happen in intense moments of conflict. Capture that those physical feelings that viscerally connects to the reader through nonverbal communication to produce a blockbuster story.

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