Listen to yourself. Write the way that feels right to you.
Often comments from others are more an indication that something needs work. In our zeal to support our fellow writers, we come up with all sorts of solutions. However, what’s most important is to know something isn’t working and for you to come up with what is the best fit.
I just don’t want you to get into trying to please everyone else.
Most important is your relationship to the story.
The story will tell you everything you need to know.
Ask the story what is best and then listen…
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